Thursday, April 14, 2016

Katie Lester

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uP129ygxzOmWJ_2zYKgBlG8VGJb2faqDLODnuVxnubw/edit
                                 
                                                   Happy Family By Pristine Cartera

2 comments:

  1. Your things that count in life was good and I liked how you gave examples for every one that you put. You could make your examples more to the point instead of being so long. Finally you could give a concession for the people that might not believe in God or might not have a good family life. Over all a very good essay.

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  2. Your things that count in life was good and I liked how you gave examples for every one that you put. You could make your examples more to the point instead of being so long. Finally you could give a concession for the people that might not believe in God or might not have a good family life. Over all a very good essay.

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